Ii
Knight
Palatine Baron
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Post by Ii on May 31, 2010 12:46:38 GMT 9
III. - Grammatical changes only V. - Unchanged except for a grammatical error. We did not change any meaning above (or make any changes that we believe could do so). We did make one change to section IV that is more about redundancy in the wording than in meaning, but we share it in case someone can make a case for or against it. IV. Specific Obligations of the Coronet Original | Proposed changes | A. The Coronet must be residents of the Barony and reside within the Barony throughout their term on the Baronial thrones. | A. The Coronet must reside within the Barony throughout their term on the Baronial thrones.
| B. The Coronet must be present at their Coronet Tourney, their Investiture, and the Coronet Tourney and Investiture of their successors. | B. The Coronet must be present at their Coronet Tourney, their Investiture, and the Coronet Tourney and Investiture of their successors. | C. The Coronet must maintain membership in the Society for Creative Anachronism, Inc. during their tenure on the Baronial thrones. | C. The Coronet must maintain membership in the Society for Creative Anachronism, Inc. during their tenure on the Baronial thrones. |
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